Wednesday, May 21, 2014

"Literary Showdown"

"Literary Showdown"

We are two labels on the shelf We are two labels on the shelf
Drawing in our audience Drawing in our audience

I’m for the erudite
The go-getters
The delvers
For those that read for the sake of reading
But still
I bring enjoyment I bring enjoyment
To bustling young minds
Those that crave a taste of what’s beyond
The life they know
Those that dream of dragons
And magic and man-bears and mars
I shine a light, a sun
I brighten rainy days To brighten rainy days
As I give my disciples something to ponder
Something to wrap their minds around
And wonder why? How?
I contain the greatest works known to mankind
The castles The castles
The wizards, the aliens I conjure
Aren’t meant to bore or scare
They are meant to enthrall
To entice
To draw in the young mind
And then reveal a world full of action
and optimism, take them to an idyllic place,
The palaces of shimmering glass A palace of shimmering glass
Constructed by author-architects
From the simplest building material:
Words
My writers spin delicate webs
No strand out of place
And not one thread too many
Each building on the last
Layering on silky meaning
Until at last the creation is complete
And a new world emerges And a new world emerges
A world without pain, suffering, and drama
A world with a lesson to teach A world with a lesson to teach
A greater truth
A take away,
But one that would fall flat But one that would fall flat
Without the support of its story Without the support of its story

"There and Back Again"


"There and Back Again"

Scene: A typical suburban neighborhood park, complete with swing set, jungle gym, etc. A boy plays in the sandbox with a set of toys based on character from J.R.R Tolkien’s The Hobbit. As the child plays, a man comes along, sees the child and the toys, frowns, and confronts the child:

MAN (To himself): Hmmm… Those toys look awfully familiar… (To the boy) Son, where did you get those toys?

BOY: These? My father gave them to me. The man at the toy store they weren’t appropriate for a kid my age, but my dad is a big shot literary critic. He can get me anything, for the right price.

MAN: I thought those figurines looked familiar! The same man at the toy store promised those to me! They are valuable collectors items, and he said that they would be safest in the hands of a responsible adult.

BOY: But these are toys! They aren’t meant for adults.

MAN: They are certainly more than mere toys. The fine craftsmanship and exquisite detail makes them far more valuable than you could understand.

BOY: But, they are just silly action figures. And adults don’t even play with toys.

MAN: There are more ways to take pleasure in a toy than just by playing with it.

BOY: What enjoyment could an adult possibly get from them?

MAN: To a child, these toys are just a source of amusement, with no real lasting impact. For an adult, however, especially a connoisseur like myself, these toys are more than just toys. They are works of art, and just looking at them is an experience in itself.

BOY: (Holding up an action figure of Beorn, the shape-shifting half-man-half-bear) So you like to play with toys like this one too?

MAN: (Chuckles) It’s not exactly playing. It’s more like experiencing. Every time I look at a fine toy (he motions for the Beorn action figure, which the child hands over), I gain a new perspective, an even deeper appreciation for the art. Take this one, for example. Do you see how smoothly he can change from gentle man (he presses a button, and the toy transforms) to troll-eating bear? And from the seamless craftsmanship, it’s perfectly disguised. It’s not choppy or awkward; it flows beautifully from one to the other, revealing what’s below the surface.

BOY: (Doubtfully) I guess…

MAN: (Continues enthusiastically) The beauty is in the details. See how the beard remains the same whether he’s a man or a bear? Even though, he’s a terrifying monster, he still has his human soul. His flesh matches both the tone of a man and a bear, his teeth, even in human form, are sharp as knives. Nothing superfluous, nothing out of place. All of the details included in his design build on each other, and reveal a deeper truth about him as a character.

BOY: Mister, you’re a little crazy about toys…

MAN: That I may be, but that man at the toy store was right. These are definitely collector’s items.

BOY: But mister… toys are meant for children. They are meant to go in the bathtub, out into the sandbox, and sometimes get lost under the couch. They let the imagination run wild, and make the world seem a little more innocent for awhile. No matter what’s going on, I can always find happiness in my toys. They need to be free, not trapped behind some display case. But, I thinl I understand your side too. Here. (He hands the man the figure of Beorn)

MAN: Thank you, you’re too kind. But you know, you’re right too, son. Maybe I should enjoy them more for what they are. (He continues his walk along the path in the park)

"Letter to the Publisher"


"Letter to the Publisher"

21 September 1937
To: George Allen and Unwin Ltd, Publishers
Ormond House, 26-27 Boswell Street, London

Dear Allen and Unwin,

Today I was outraged to hear that you plan on marketing my novel, The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey as a book for children. In your opinion, the story has too many fantastic aspects and is too whimsical to be advertised as adult literature. I hope I make it clear in this letter that nothing could be further from the truth.
You see, great literature has less to do with the topic it addresses as how it addresses that topic. Yes, my novel includes many fantastic characters, and events transpire that could never conceivably occur on the earth we know- but this aspect of childish appeal does not prevent adults from enjoying my book. The appeal of literature lies in its craft: how the various elements and ideas in a book weave together and become more than the sum of their individual parts. The details I included do not merely serve the purpose of entertaining children; they are chosen carefully to work on multiple levels and convey more meaning. One of my primary goals with the novel was to create a mythology that people in this day and age find more relatable. All of the names, from Gandalf to Mirkwood, are taken from Norse mythology and function towards this goal. Bilbo and the dwarves are not only going on a quest for the dwarves’ treasure; Bilbo is setting out on his own quest, for self-exploration and growth as a person (or hobbit). The geography of middle earth is more than just mountains and forests- these also symbolize the challenges Bilbo overcomes in his search for his identity. And of course there is Beorn, the half man half bear shape shifter. Could the metaphor for man having a dual nature be any more obvious?
I could go on, but I think I have made my point. I hope you will take these ideas into consideration as you move forward with the marketing of my work of art.

Yours in literature,
J.R.R Tolkien

The Hobbit: Fairy Tale or Epic Myth?


The Hobbit: Fairy Tale or Epic Myth?
When J.R.R Tolkien’s The Hobbit was originally published in 1937, it was received as nothing more than a children’s fantasy novel. Many critics felt that the book was too whimsical and contained too many childish aspects for adult readers. However, Tolkien maintained throughout his life that The Hobbit was aimed at more than just children and adolescents (Akers). Having retained popularity for more than seventy years– the third best selling work of fiction in history– The Hobbit is undeniably a classic. But can The Hobbit be included among the cannon, or is it confined to the realm of children’s literature?
Over the course of the year, we have developed a thorough definition of what makes adult literature great, or classic. Above all, great works of literature are great works of art springing from the mind, the creative imagination, of the author. The author creates a new world, as opposed to squeezing what they can out of another (Nabokov). Every word and every detail is arranged just so, “an attempt to make something as formed and controlled as a building (Woolf). Prose tells us there is nothing superfluous; everything has a function, and the details are “controlled by some overall purpose” (O’Connor). Great works are different than lesser, “rubbish reading” in that they convey a whole, not a lesser, truth about life, and that truth is inseparable from the story itself (Woolf). Writers must be storytellers, teachers, and enchanters, and it is the enchanter that sets the greats apart from the rest (Nabokov). Thomas Foster also provides a list of devices and features to look for in literature, as authors commonly use them to get to deeper ideas.
Essentially, the quality of a work comes from the author’s inventiveness and control and use of language, allowing the work to operate on multiple levels to create and convey theme. But do the same characteristics apply to children’s literature? In short, there is no line that separates children’s literature from adult literature. Rather, there are certain characteristics that are more common to appear in, but are not limited to, children’s literature (Sale). Children’s works are more likely to contain action and fantasy than works aimed at adults. Fantasy includes anything that is outside the normal human perception of reality, and novels for children tend to be faster paced than those for adults. Children’s works also tend to be about childhood, or are told from a child’s point of view to further appeal to younger people. Many children’s books attempt to balance the idyllic and didactic. An optimistic tone and proximity to nature and friends create an appealing, utopian environment for children, and many children’s authors attempt to include a positive, instructive message (Hanlin). Beyond these common traits, it is impossible to separate adult literature and children’s literature because so many books appeal to a wide range of ages. Robinson Crusoe, Gulliver’s Travels, and The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn were not written specifically for children, but children have enjoyed them for decades.
The Hobbit is one such “crossover” book, having attraction on the surface to hold the interest of younger people while also operating on a deeper level to appeal to adults. The Hobbit contains many of the characteristics common in children’s literature. Compared to other works we have read this year, works commonly described as adult literature, The Hobbit is extraordinarily fast paced and action-packed. Fantasy also plays a large role in the book. The Hobbit takes place in Middle-Earth, a land with many similarities to the earth we know (humans, horses, geography), but additionally contains many fantastic characters like trolls, dwarves, giant talking spiders, and shape shifting bear-men. It contains an idyllic environment as the main character, Bilbo, proceeds on his quest in close contact with nature and his company of friends. While The Hobbit is not didactic in that it tries to convey a life lesson, it is didactic in that it has a theme, and other elements beneath the surface action– and it is this that gives The Hobbit its broad appeal, and makes it more than just a book for children.
Take the scene in which Bilbo stumbles into Gollum’s cavern and finds the magic ring for the first time. Bilbo and the dwarves have become separated in their attempt to escape the troll infested mountain, and Bilbo is stumbling deeper into its heart. Suddenly, Bilbo splashes into an underground lake. This may seem like an inconsequential event, but Tolkien orchestrates his details to work towards a deeper purpose. As Foster explains, a character getting wet always has another purpose. Bilbo’s plunge into the lake represents a baptism, and it marks a turning point in his character. Since the opening pages, a struggle has been raging inside Bilbo between his two lineages: his timid, insipid Baggins side and his boisterous and adventurous Took side. Until this moment, his Baggins’ side has the upper hand; just before he stumbles into the water he thinks “of himself frying bacon and eggs in his kitchen at home” (76). After this, however, Bilbo begins to enjoy his adventure and embrace his role as “the burglar,” helping the dwarves navigate through the forest of Mirkwood without getting eaten by giant spiders or taken prisoner by wood elves, and then assisting them in vanquishing Smaug, the dragon. The ring Bilbo finds is also more than just a magic ring; it symbolizes the corrupting potential of power. Tolkien found this idea important enough to write another whole series about it.
As much as The Hobbit contains the characteristics of a children’s book, it also has the qualities of adult literature. A closer look at The Hobbit reveals that Tolkien does not include details and events at random; instead, he uses them to create deeper levels of meaning and communicate more, like the other great writers we have studied this year. Many of these details are used to create ideas Foster discusses. The Hobbit is not designed to appeal exclusively to children or adults. Rather, it contains elements of both children’s and adult literature that have helped it remain popular for multiple generations. The Hobbit’s fast paced action and fantasy world appeal to children, while adults take pleasure in its elements of great literature.

Friday, May 9, 2014

Blog Post #2

Now that I have finished reading The Hobbit, I have a pretty good idea of where I want to go with my research. In the end, The Hobbit has a happy ending: Bilbo and the dwarves make it through all of their challenges, reach the lonely mountain, and with some help from the men of Laketown (one of whose archers slays the dragon Smaug) reclaim their treasure under the mountain. Not all is well immediately, however; a conflict that comes to be known as the battle of five armies transpires, as groups of goblins and wargs come to fight against the dwarves and men to steal the treasure. A bloody battle ensues, and it is only after the eagles of the Misty Mountains arrive that the goblins are driven off for good. Finally, Bilbo is able to return to his beloved hobbit hole with Gandalf.
After a tiny amount of initial poking around, I discovered that The Hobbit is regarded as one of the classics of "children's literature." I want to explore this concept further in my research. What distinguishes classics in children's literature from classics of literature in general? How exactly is children's literature defined? How has The Hobbit been regarded throughout history? And, most importantly, does The Hobbit a place among the classics in general, not specifically kiddie lit? I think the small differences in style and prose I noticed while reading Tolkien, compared to the other authors we have read this year, result from The Hobbit originally being intended as a children's book. The Hobbit is certainly more plot-centric than the other novels we have read this year. There is a lot more action, and the plot moves at a quicker pace. This probably is intentional, to make the story capture and keep the attention of younger people. I also noticed aspects of classic literature that we have been studying all year, and I think there are certainly underlying themes, deeper than the level of the plot. These themes are developed not through the action, but mainly through the interactions of the characters. Bilbo undergoes a major transformation as the story progresses. Tolkien alludes to this early on, when he reveals that Bilbo has ancestors, the Tooks, who were great adventurers, but he also delineates Bilbo as a very bland and insipid fellow. As the story progresses, however, Bilbo wishes for the warmth and comfort of his hobbit hole less and less, and comes to embrace adventure. This could connect to the idea of experience resulting in personal growth. The dwarves, who initially think Bilbo is useless, come to regard him as a valuable member of their expedition, after he saves them from numerous sticky spots. Don't judge a book by its cover. These, in addition to the devices I mentioned in my first post, all come together and build on one another. I just need to read about how The hobbit is perceived, and maybe some lit crit, to decided for myself if it is a classic.

Monday, May 5, 2014

Blog Post #1

For my final independent reading book of the year, I decided to return to a cherished novel from my formative years. When I was young, maybe eight or nine, my mom read me one of my all-time favorite fantasy/adventure books: The Hobbit. At the time, I loved it for its fast-paced action, whimsical characters, and vivid details. Now, I want to return to it to see how it stacks up against the cannon- the books that are accepted as the best, the novels that are considered the classics. The Hobbit has had its fair share of popularity, but does it hold its own against the likes of Moby Dick and War and Peace? Does it have the qualities of great literature we have been examining all year? Does it have an underlying message about the truths of life? Or is it merely as important as the mystery novels Thomas Foster is so fond of- thrilling, captivating, and capable of taking the reader on an emotional journey, but lacking any real weight or staying power.
So far, I have indeed found many of the other things Foster talks about cropping up. However, although I can't exactly put my finger on it, I can sense a difference in the style and quality of the writing, and I haven't yet figured out how all of the events fit in to the deeper puzzle, if there is one. So far our hero, Bilbo Baggins, has embarked on his quest to help the dwarves in the company of Thorin Oakenshield recover their treasure from the lonely mountain. They lost it in a great battle  to the terrible dragon, Smaug. Of course, Foster would tell us that Bilbo's journey, his quest if you will, is more than just getting from point A to point B. It is about Bilbo's development and growth in some way. So far, it seems that Tolkien could be getting at something like this. Bilbo's behavior before the trip- he is timid and rather unadventurous- and his changing attitude as it progresses towards one of embracing the unknown could signify his changing attitude towards life as a whole. Tolkien also uses weather effectively to augment mood and convey meaning. The weather parallels the spirits of the traveling company, and enhances the reader's understanding of their mood. Each obstacle that they must conquer- from the trolls to Mirkwood to the Elvenking- might represent a deeper idea, and the book might be like an allegory. However, these devices are presented in such a way that is somewhat less elegant than the styles of other great writers we have read this year. The devices jump out as more obvious, as if they were forced. Not to say that Tolkien's writing is bad, it just seems a little less tight, a little less purposeful in places than that of the brilliant writers we have studied. I will have to read further before I decide if The Hobbit deserves a place amongst the greatest books of our time.